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We love because
we're hollow inside.
Love drains away
and we die.
I guess God could fill it,
but if he did
could we hear our hearts beating?
And I have a feeling
God meant for this.
Light us up,
maybe,
then leave us to be empty.

Sometimes I wonder
Are we built for one another?
Cause I am made
of incompatible parts,
like point charges
in a tiny space.

We raise our hands to heaven
while our feet point to hell.
The singing red
in my arms and legs
reminds me of myself.

This skin is a shield
between me and the rain.
I would see stars
numb to the dirt
in my veins.

God, is this living?
A distraction?
God, is this dying?
My sins and me
And nothing?
Blame God for injustice,
but it's us -
it's just us.
If we all hurt a little,
no one does.

But down comes the sun, down,
down it comes again.
Every lowly silhouette
a yellow masquerade.

And when the rain comes
and cleans us,
I hope you're ready
for the dirt to wash away.
I hope that you remain.
©2008-2009 ~elle-sophocles
:iconelle-sophocles:

Author's Comments

Dear reader, I think you know what I mean.

Daily Deviation

Given 2008-04-20

Something just stays with you after reading Moleskine Prayer by ~elle-sophocles, there is a deeper and very meaningful message here that will remind us how powerful that "God" really is. (Suggested by ~crispylilapeth and Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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love 4 4 joy 1 1 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconlasagnabomb:
the alleys will flow marble intercourse

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Sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast.
:iconcrispylilapeth:
its somthing that resides within the lines such as "Sometimes I wonder Are we built for one another?" , "I guess God could fill it,
but if he did could we hear our hearts beating?" and countless other treasures that i find myself in a solemn reflection of spirituality and self - perhaps what you intended, perhaps not, but none the less, a moving peice of writing which leaves me, as per usual in utter amazment of the mechanics of you mind
narcissistic? possibly
rubbish? far from it

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jennaichu, i choose YOU!
:iconelle-sophocles:
<love>

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Jennaichu used APATHY ATTACK!
... but nothing happened.
:iconjedfire:
it's very good, keep weeding :D

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you are welcome to visit my gallery [link]
#Jingulus
#FlashMob
:iconeternalember:
wow. theres a lot of good stuff in here. I really like this: "Blame God for injustice,
but it's us -
it's all us." thats a good point.....I just really like this :)

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God save the Queen, but why can't God save me? -"Lost Soul", Negative

I heal my wounds with grief.....and weep myself alive- "song or suicide", HIM

Buffaloes are cool. they're like badass cows....
:iconelle-sophocles:
hey, thanks very much ^^ I'm glad if some of my very personal ideas and feelings are getting across to people.

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Jennaichu used APATHY ATTACK!
... but nothing happened.
:iconeternalember:
you're welcome ^^ they seem to be pretty cool ideas :)

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God save the Queen, but why can't God save me? -"Lost Soul", Negative

I heal my wounds with grief.....and weep myself alive- "song or suicide", HIM

Buffaloes are cool. they're like badass cows....
:icongreendino1:
wow you truly are an inspiring writer, "If we all hurt a little,
no one does." i think that was my favorite part, but its hard to choose

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Life is weird.
:icondarkelvenmage:
Absolutely beautiful. Writing right before sleep often births such strange and lovely phrases. :3
:icontemari-nara-15:
Belle.

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--Shikamaru Nara--

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